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on Fri Dec 27, 2013 2:59 pm
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Evo jedne teme, pa možda je vezana za temu "Tema o psihologiji i životu" zato jer sam napisao hrpetinu tekstova i pjesama o stvarima kao što su u toj temi.Od života pa do smrti.Jedno prije pola godine sam čitao tekstove raznih bendova koje slušam pa mi je došlo na ideju: "Hej, pa ti se kužiš u ova sranja o životu, probaj i ti napisat koju "morbidnu" stvar, možda ti i uspije."
I tako, sad imam negdje oko dvadesetak pjesama lol.Ako ste vi pisali neke pjesme ili tekstove, ne moraju nužno biti morbidne, mogu bit i romantične, stavite u ovu temu.A ja ću staviti par tekstova koje sam ja napisao.

Ova je o mojoj teoriji uništenja svijeta, naziv pjesme je došao iz Painova jutsua lol.
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Planetary Destruction

Release this wind
Danger is coming
Dark blood crawling
Judgment wanting
To destroy this night

Liberate this fire
Darkness is striking
With cold lightning
Evil monsters biting
To destroy this night

Nightmare is on the way
I won't remember this day
Chaos bringing pain
We shall all die in vain!
In vain!
In vain!

Terror is rising, storm is coming
Light is fading, hope is falling
This world will fall apart

Everything shall burn
Because we will never learn
This world will fall apart

Nightmare is on the way
I won't remember this day
Chaos bringing pain
We shall all die in vain!
In vain!
In vain!

Release this pain
Release this pain
We shall all die in vain!
In vain!
In vain!
In pain!

Ova je o osveti, kad se želite nekome tako jako osvetiti da želite vidjeti tu osobu kako pati.Bolesno, zar ne?
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Final Vengeance

Vengeance arise!
Vengeance arise!

You determined my fate
You resurrected my hate
Took my everything to grave
Lost all that I gave

Now you will taste my blade
And all that you have will fade
The same way my light vanished
All crimes will be punished

Killing you is my goal
My vengeance will never fall!
I watch you burn in flames
And I will perish you from this world
This is my final vengeance

Vengeance strike!
Vengeance strike!

There is no escape from hell
You know that very well
I have pity your death
Because this is the path

Soon you will cry for saviour rain
But my chaos will bring only pain
Justice seeks for truth of this world
Now I am your eternal lord

Killing you is my goal
My vengeance will never fall!
I watch you burn in flames
And I will perish you from this world
Now you will fear my wrath
Suffer and die
This is my final vengeance

Stand up!
Don't die without fight
But I won't let you feel this power
Embrace your death
Because this is where it ends

I am your world
I am your lord
I am your world
I am your lord

Killing you is my goal
My vengeance will never fall!
I watch you burn in flames
And I will perish you from this world
Now you will fear my wrath
Suffer and die
This is my final vengeance

Killing you is my goal
My vengeance will never fall!

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on Fri Dec 27, 2013 3:15 pm
Wow, plašiš me hahaha

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on Fri Dec 27, 2013 3:19 pm
Nekad i sam sebe plašim hahahaha.Nije to ništa, samo pogledaj ovaj tekst od Avenged Sevenfolda, o nekrofiliji je tako da su moji tekstovi male mace prema tome:

Spoiler:
A Little Piece Of Heaven

Before the story begins, is it such a sin,
For me to take what's mine, until the end of time
We were more than friends, before the story ends,
And I will take what's mine, create what God would never design

Our love had been so strong for far too long,
I was weak with fear that something would go wrong,
Before the possibilities came true,
I took all possibility from you

Almost laughed myself to tears,
(Ha hahahahaha)
Conjuring her deepest fears
(Come here you fucking bitch)

Must have stabbed her fifty fucking times,
I can't believe it,
Ripped her heart out right before her eyes,
Eyes over easy, eat it, eat it, eat it

She was never this good in bed even when she was sleeping
Now she's just so perfect I've never been quite so fucking deep in
It goes on and on and on,
I can keep you looking young and preserved forever,
With a fountain spray on your youth whenever

'Cause I really always knew that my little crime
Would be cold that's why I got a heater for your thighs
And I know, I know it's not your time
But bye, bye
And a word to the wise when the fire dies
You think it's over but it's just begun
But baby don't cry

You had my heart, at least for the most part
'Cause everybody's gotta die sometime,
We fell apart, let's make a new start
'Cause everybody's gotta die sometime, yeah yeah
But baby don't cry

Now possibilities I'd never considered,
Are occurring the likes of which I'd never heard,
Now an angry soul comes back from beyond the grave,
To repossess a body with which I'd misbehaved

Smiling right from ear to ear
Almost laughed herself to tears

Must have stabbed him fifty fucking times
I can't believe it
Ripped his heart out right before his eyes
Eyes over easy, eat it, eat it, eat it

(Eat the shit out of it)
Now that it's done I realize the error of my ways
I must venture back to apologize from somewhere far beyond the grave

I gotta make up for what I've done
'Cause I was all up in a piece of heaven
While you burned in hell, no peace forever

'Cause I really always knew that my little crime
Would be cold that's why I got a heater for your thighs
And I know, I know it's not your time
But bye, bye
And a word to the wise when the fire dies
You think it's over but it's just begun
But baby don't cry

You had my heart, at least for the most part
'Cause everybody's gotta die sometime,
We fell apart, let's make a new start
'Cause everybody's gotta die sometime, yeah yeah
But baby don't cry

[Maniacal laughter]

I will suffer for so long
(What will you do, not long enough)
To make it up to you
(I pray to God that you do)
I'll do whatever you want me to do
(Well then I'll grant you one chance)
And if it's not enough
(If it's not enough, If it's not enough)
If it's not enough
(Not enough)
Try again
(Try again)
And again
(And again)
Over and over again

We're coming back, coming back
We'll live forever, live forever
Let's have wedding, have a wedding
Let's start the killing, start the killing
(You fucking bitch)

[Maniacal laughter]

"Do you take this man in death for the rest of your unnatural life?"
"Yes, I do"
"Do you take this woman in death for the rest of your unnatural life?"
"I do"
"I now pronounce you..."

'Cause I really always knew that my little crime
Would be cold that's why I got a heater for your thighs
And I know, I know it's not your time
But bye, bye
And a word to the wise when the fire dies
You think it's over but it's just begun
But baby don't cry

You had my heart, at least for the most part
'Cause everybody's gotta die sometime,
We fell apart, let's make a new start
'Cause everybody's gotta die sometime, yeah yeah
But baby don't cry

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on Fri Dec 27, 2013 3:21 pm
koji kurac hahahah hoću mami
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on Sun Dec 29, 2013 9:24 pm
najs xD

radujem se idućim tekstovima tj. pjesmama ^^
(što reći, brutalne stvari su mi kawaii xD)

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on Sun Dec 29, 2013 9:39 pm
oh bože toliko za čitati ali je dobro.

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on Sun Dec 29, 2013 9:45 pm
I ja kažem Very Happy Ali razmišljam da dam tekstove jednom metal bendu iz mog grada ili da ih čuvam pa ako ja ikad budem imo bend haha.

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on Wed Jan 01, 2014 3:22 pm
Evo jedne nove, nazvao sam je Chicken Soup jer ne znam kako da je nazovem pa mi možda vi možete dat neki prijedlog za naziv pjesme.Ovoga puta je neka ljubavno-morbidna, lol.
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Illusion

One more step
Is between me and you
But you are killing
Everything around me

It's harder to breathe
No more flames to ensure the guilt
But you are killing
Everything around me

This depth is too deep
This love is too hard to keep
Because you are killing
Everything around me!

Pain is much too strong
Agony feels so long
But you are burning
Everything around me

I never wanted to hate
We will die because it's too late
But you are burning
Everything around me

This depth is too deep
This love is too hard to keep
Because you are burning
Everything around me!

Not found my peace
Not ready to release

Not found my peace
Not ready to release

Not ready to release!

This depth is too deep
This love is too hard to keep
Because you are killing
Everything around me
Because you are burning
Everything around me!


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on Wed Jan 01, 2014 4:54 pm
Everything around me! ?

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on Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:35 pm
I ja sam u početku mislio tako nešto, ali zapravo želim upotrijebiti riječi koje nisu u pjesmi, koje nemaju veze s tekstom, ali da imaju s idejom pjesme.

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on Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:40 pm
You and not me? Doduše već postoji takav naslov za jednu pjesmu od Devour the Day.

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on Wed Jan 01, 2014 9:25 pm
Htio sam čak nešto na latinskom probati, ali ipak sam odustao.Ali evo, došlo mi je par naziva u glavu pa recite koji je bolji:

Darkness Within
Chaos and Despair
Bury Me Alive
Illusion

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on Wed Jan 01, 2014 10:36 pm
Illusion jednostavno i predivno budi ono nešto u meni. Ovu drugo je pak donekle pretjerivanje barem meni.

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on Thu Jan 02, 2014 1:57 pm
Ah da, Illusion sam stavio zato jer za svoj život govorim da je Iluzija pa eto, nek se zove Illusion.

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