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Lelou1524
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Wed Jan 30, 2013 9:21 pm
Odusta sam od Sentoki Warriora. Preloše.
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Eto nova pričica. Potruditi ću se da napišem ljepe opise, razvijem dobre likove.
Anyway kratki sadržaj.
Edward je tineđer (bože tko se će se zamarati gramatiku, đastin biber Very Happy). I jednog dana spletom okolnosti padne u komu. Spletom okolnosti, dobiva moći.
Probudi se, željan osvete.
Na putu susreće jedanke sebi, ali ga i policija/detektivi poćinju pratiti.
Biti će krvi, krvi, krvi, krvi, krvi, tipiča život, erotika, ljubav, smisao života.
And so on.
Nema prijavnica. Biž ća.
KUPUJEM IZMIŠLJENA AUTORSKA PRAVA. o.O

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Wed Jan 30, 2013 9:38 pm
Znači, bit će krvi? Nisi bio dovoljno jasan na tom polju. ahahahaha

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Wed Jan 30, 2013 10:42 pm
reci cu ti samo jednu stvar. Lockat cu ti temu (i svaku novu koju otvoris) ako ne promjenis ime glavnog lika jer nisi mogao naci gore ime Very Happy

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Thu Jan 31, 2013 5:37 am
aw a oke D:
mislim to mi je prvo paloo na pamet xD
Wut about Maikeru? ._.
Ili Akito .-.

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Thu Jan 31, 2013 1:51 pm
Ima i dobrih Edwarda. Kao naprimjer Edward Elric ili Edward Wong Hau Pepelu Tivrusky IV. OK, ovaj drugi je žensko, ali svejedno. Ako hoćeš cool ime imam par prijedloga:
Akito je dobro, cool ime za glavnog lika.
Simon (u fikciji je ime Simon vrlo često korišteno za glavne likove jer izaziva osjećaj vodstva kao u igri Simon says)
Lelouch (well, duh)
Yami (shameless self promotion Razz )

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Thu Jan 31, 2013 2:59 pm
bilo koje ime, ali pobogu samo ne edward Very Happy

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Thu Jan 31, 2013 3:49 pm
jacob? xD
razmišljao sam o imenu Sora? biće sora ili akito.

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Sun Feb 10, 2013 9:09 pm
Spoiler:

Eto prvi chapter. Komajte. Možda je moglo malo bolje xD

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Sun Feb 10, 2013 11:57 pm
Ovo je bilo super. kul

Lucy mi se čini kao kombinacija C.C. i Lucy iz Elfen Lieda, jesam li u pravu?

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Mon Feb 11, 2013 5:13 am
oh well. :blush:
dap tako nekako.

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Sun Jun 23, 2013 11:46 pm
Jooo.
Malo sam čekao da mi se DOTA 2 skine pa sam odlučio malo pisati... Razz
Spoiler:
Ispričavam se na nekim ije je i č i ć pogreškama ne radi mi ono ispravljanje XD. Ha ono već me ruka zabolila ._.

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Sun Jun 23, 2013 11:59 pm
Lelou1524 (citat):-''Nabijem te na kurac kurvo, odjebi.''- reče Akita te krene dalje.
-''Puši kurac, mali, tatu ti jebem.''- vikne ova.
Smijao sam se nekih 5 minuta na ovo. 

Sviđa mi se detaljno opisivanje svog tog komadanja i ubijanja. Twisted Evil

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